P5

Evaluation of Feedback

As a whole, my script was well received aside from the fact that the ending didn't feel like the end of an opening but an ending to a short story. Maybe I should've ended on a cliffhanger to really show that there's more to the story after the last page of my script. I think Mark needed more character development as his character progression seemed force and slightly unnatural. I feel that I should've planned my script more.